Judas
He went away alone to die, into
the nothingness. Carrying sins
his own
Gave up his spirit in despair.
Jesus
He went away alone to die, into the
nothingness. Carrying sins
not his own … and Judas,
Gave up his spirit in hope.
© Jason Goroncy, 2008
I like it, though I’m a little confused: do you mean Jesus was carrying Judas, or that he was carrying Judas’ sin?
Both.