He went away alone to die, into
the nothingness. Carrying sins
Gave up his spirit in despair.
He went away alone to die, into the
nothingness. Carrying sins
not his own … and Judas,
Gave up his spirit in hope.
© Jason Goroncy, 2008
I like it, though I’m a little confused: do you mean Jesus was carrying Judas, or that he was carrying Judas’ sin?